27.11.2014
SABIHA: The artists performances was good, a clear daytime to nightime transition, suggestions 'Yeaaaaah' change the shot or location
JULIE: The people walking on the street was too much of a random shot put in
KRISTIAN: A bit too repetitive need more jumpcuts
DURIM: Its effective but should add more slow motions
CORY: Strong performances, however we should shake the camera around more, more sharp and liked the ending with the different costumes
REBECCA: Make it more visually exciting on base tracks, bleed the colour out on past scenes (gamma down), rest is more vibrant. One really jumpy camera movements, sort out framing in last performance
What do you think about chorus?
FERGOS: dissolve used properly, liked first two chorus how they are done individual and then in the last chorus both artists come together, looks really good
dissolved used properly.
EDLINE: bare cute
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